The Times, November 10, 2017

(23 words) Lovely picture, but the whole point is that these are the autumn colours for which New England is renowned. You don’t need to say that maples are trees. And ‘Scenic root’? Pathetic.

I would put:

Falling leaves: Thousands of maples display their autumn colours beside the Kancamagus Highway, one of the renowned New England fall foliage drives (22 words)

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