#560

Australia: Crocodile sinks his teeth into a flying drone

A crocodile leapt out of the water at a wildlife park in Darwin and sunk its teeth into a low flying drone.

BBC News Online, October 2, 2021

Two errors for the price of one.

Usually animals should be ‘it’ rather than ‘he’ or ‘she’, but this one gives both – you must be consistent.

The past tense of ‘sink’ is ‘sank’. ‘Sunk’ is the past participle (used with forms of ‘have’) and the passive voice.

I cannot stress strongly enough that it takes years of experience to make a good sub-editor. When I was a junior sub, almost everyone else in the department was older and wiser, and the benefit of their experience was passed down to me. A chief sub would often point out how things could be improved. These days most older subs have been dispensed with and there is no one to teach or mentor the younger ones. Staffs have been so reduced that no one has time to guide anyone else.

This clinic is an attempt to pass on my experience using real examples. I would love to receive items from others as I do not read every paper every day. I will add new entries as I come across them.