#135

The Times, July 8, 2017

It is poor practice to use the same words in the intro and heading, and exceptionally poor practice to use them in the caption as well. You could rephrase the intro to make it:

Andy Murray subjected fans to the first of his traditional Wimbledon nailbiters last night as he fought through to round four for the tenth year.

The caption could be one of many things, for example:

Andy Murray: Saved five set points against Italy’s Fabio Fognini

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