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Pictured: The neighbour of toddler who was mauled by 11-stone ‘American Bully’ dogs who has pled guilty to owning dangerously out of control animals

Mail Online, May 10,2017

Apart from using ‘who’ twice, this heading includes the Americanism ‘pled’. In Britain we say ‘pleaded’. This would be better:

Pictured: Neighbour of toddler mauled by 11-stone ‘American Bully’ dogs. He has pleaded guilty to owning dangerously out-of-control animals

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